Lethal Fume Comments

Fire sparked from root burns grass. This is truly said sir ji. This poem is wonderful and I have tried to understand this.

The greatest failing of mankind is the inability to live in peace. Well said. Thank you my friend

Here to revisit this powerful write. Yes, we have to enjoin everyone through the power of our pen to abhor war and spread a universal light of love . A great piece worth of being read again.

War has been the greatest threat to man's existence! Besides sudden death, it also leads to slow suffering! The bomb blasts in Hiroshima and Nagasaki have turned the whole area lethal and lethal radiation is still lingering there crippling human lives. What we need is peace and harmony and not war! Powerfully presented!

Fire sparked from root burns grass, Straw becomes ash and sand turns brown, We need peaceful light in right path, Universal light of love let us spread. Great message.

We need to outlaw chemical warfare- -but when we look at that sentence, it seems peculiar- -it needs to say we need to outlaw warfare. Killing people is such a degenerate, ignorant, foul way to win an argument. Plus it never settles an argument- it just fuels another session of hatred, anger, and murder. Well said, my friend.10

We need peaceful light in right path, Universal light of love let us spread... Beautifully crafted lines from a great poet.

An exceptional write that touches on one of the most important political issues that beset the world. A piece so timely, well presented and executed. There is no need for another war. We are already living in a war torn world. To ignite another one, the world will be pulverized. We will be in the arms of nothingness.10

''We need peaceful light in right path, Universal light of love let us spread.'' - may your words be heard, and spread love where it is need it most.

You have analysed well...reasoned well...a well worked poem on War....War is not a solution to problems, It only gives burning sensation. This world does not need war at all, This does not need lethal fume, Anger is a vice and this raises war, Lethal fume and lethal flame, .....great words- 10+++++++++++++

War has caused so much destruction around the world, makes the earth unfit to live on. Such a human tragedy.I seem to see pictures in my mind while reading your poem. Thanks for the great sharing.

Anger is a vice and this raises war/Lethal fume and lethal flame, /Both violate peaceful rule of nature, Sleeping birds cry in agony/Animals remain in fear due to pressure……extremely well penned...very useful and informative piece of work! Thanks dear sir for sharing!