Thursday, October 17, 2013

Let Your Light Shine! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Punches all over; with not even a second’s halt
Followed by deep-sharp stabs, by
The so called Beloved's
Provoked this little dormant volcano
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Kanav Justa 18 November 2013

A very beautiful poem... each line has a very deep meaning... nice

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Kee Thampi 11 November 2013

a great To rebel, against my Heavenly Father! Couldn't stand the race: fight the temptations But broke the everlasting covenant And gave up my vows; yet hardly survived in therededication and love to Him

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Valsa George 29 October 2013

As human beings with frailties, we are all likely to trip and fall. But the moment we get up and look up to Heaven, seeking the unerring guidance of the Lord, a new life sprouts and our light begins to shine! Beautiful diction powerful enough to trace the inner struggle and the final salvation! !

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Harindhar Reddy 22 October 2013

Fantastic start to the poem. It really pulled the string of my chord. I enjoyed reading the poem. Well done poet! Punches all over; with not even a second’s halt Followed by deep-sharp stabs, by The so called Beloved's Provoked this little dormant volcano

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Louis Rams 19 October 2013

i cried unto my father- that verse stuck in my mind and gave me a visualization of it happening. excellent write!

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David Wood 19 October 2013

There is a good message in this poem, I like it.

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Dinesan Madathil 18 October 2013

A fine verse with right diction and beautiful style of rendering! The message makes a soothing touch and a believer can feel it certainly!

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Heather Wilkins 17 October 2013

glory to the Lord we should always let our light shine. a good write

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 17 October 2013

An exceptional verse, truly we have to let our light shine that we may be glorified in heaven. A marvelous write.

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Tribhawan Kaul 17 October 2013

HE tests everyone. The one who sees HIS light even in dark, is the winner. Lovely poem.

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