Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Let You Go Far Comments

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When you don’t call
Waiting for you, until two
I feel you busy
See myself empty
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Reading this I feel like I'm looking at a 21st century pre Raphaelite painting of a beautiful woman waiting anxiously, despairingly, wanting, needing, loving, having, taking, destroying, making, giving pre emotion to the arrival of her man who arrives! and when he does she attacks with a million poison spiders simply for his deception.

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Lana Grissom 27 January 2010

Really good....keep it up.

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