Friday, February 6, 2009

Let You Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walk quickly
Skittering across the two-way street
Pebbles flying,
Sweat cry-
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Cena Rose
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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 February 2009

Thrilling! Stunning! You are a remarkable poet at this tender age. I wish to see your photograph! Do u mind?

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Ana Zaldivar 06 February 2009

Nice one.. full os suspense.. Very well done! like it a lot :)

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Eyan Desir 06 February 2009

hmmmmmm, i liked the poem, but the end is a bit...........but i think u did well there hey, keep expressin your feeling ok... good write

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