Let Winter Snowflakes Fall In Summer Comments

This poem is a great example of spontaneous visualization. Let your mind be free and out of cage! Great write!

I derive great pleasure reading this beautiful poem! Seems so simple but natural and meaningful with intense poetic depth! My favorite lines: Let winter snowflakes fall in summer/And sorrow's lava extinguish the ocean/In the game of life be a whimsical runner! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

Let winter snowflakes fall in summer And sorrow's lava extinguish the ocean In the game of life be a whimsical runner. Best of all write for fun with no need to rhyme And no need to excogitate Let your mind be free and out of cage........touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem has been shared hauntingly. Thanks for posting.

The triplet format sounds good, , , , a nice suggestion to set our heart and mind free to write without opting for rhyming words...very adorable poem....10++

Let winter snowflakes fall in summer And sorrow's lava extinguish the ocean In the game of life be a whimsical runner. A nice idea in a nice poem.

A whimsical runner! Exudes liberty and laughing disregard for conformity. You may shock the world with simple appreciation of those things considered mundane by most. Make a splash and escape the cage. Wonderful!

Out of the cage! ! On stage with your sage; Let your mind be free. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.