Sunday, March 3, 2013

Let We Sway, Together Comments

Rating: 3.9

Tied under the tree of destiny
Life does swing
Come the moving time
Uncertainty blows our string
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 02 March 2020

A nice dedication to a true friend. As I read, for some reason I was reminded of old Rogers-Astaire films.

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Dev Anand 01 September 2017

this is a fine poem für Ellias celebrating your wonderful friendship. may oyu have so many such friends here. God bless u dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 August 2017

It is a marvellous poem having stunning expression full of positiveness and also a great dedication to your friend Ellias who enspires you ever. Let it be quoted some lines in this regard.. Under this tree, tree of destiny Fate was delivered on us For us sway together Your morning light to my life string Swayed in a breeze of hope Together we are together we will ever Thanks for sharing this lovely gem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 June 2017

A stunning write. Just beautiful...you are so talented Soul. This one touched my heart...10+++

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Unwritten Soul 13 June 2017

Awwww thanks dear, you are so kind to me...hope you enjoyed it

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

The light of hope! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Frank James Davis 04 April 2013

A lovely, heartfelt and most worthy tribute, Soul. Sweet, uplifting sentiments.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 27 March 2013

Wonderful poem Soul, it truly shows what poetry can do for the whole world....the unity that poets on this site shows is amazing.....I feel blessed to be part of this site.... Siya_! !

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An amazing intellectual exercise in the form a poem that emanates its best. This poem is an Unwritten Soul piece with remarkable charm! Let us sway together in this forum...

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Valsa George 09 March 2013

Enjoyed reading this tale of intimate companionship! It breathes out hope, ever growing hope, never shaken by the gales of life! !

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Poetheart Morgan 06 March 2013

Love when i see the friends so close. For me friend is the best of life. Who support us even when we are wrong! Friends no doubt! I have 2 big ones and searching for more. Great poem Soul. Thanks. Now i have what to say to mine loved ones and friends.

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Neela Nath Das 05 March 2013

A nice Hope poem. Optimism is in every line.10++++++

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 03 March 2013

Soul…..I am truly speechless. I have no words to say. I think my deep thanks give you the message, or a quack….yeah…the word Quack, has lots of things to say, it can say that life has lots of meanings but it can be so simple. We can deliver our messages of peace and love with simple words, simple smiles, we can be friends all over the world as I always say. Every day we wake up with a hope, but sometimes this feeling that THERE IS NO DIFFERENT AND HOPE in the life ahead, will make me worry, it will hurt me from depth...There is nothing to be glad of..At least the things those I dream...The sweet days….. It's been long time since I had sweet diaries with the friends those we invited, long time that I had my true friends with their smile. Now, I just look around myself, look at the sky and see the planes crossing this sky. I always hope to have the hope to find new hopes in them. And those hopes are the friends all over the world. The true hearts and loves. I just have 21 days to take my answer. To see a person…And I am truly depressed it's been long time that I am not smooth from inside... And your work, your work is just a spiritual gift. And I should say that I love this work and I love you soul. You were the first one who helps me here. And now…..I should always turn this device on, look at my inbox……Hey Anderson, I am coming! ! ! ! ! ! ! YUK! It's a dream….it's a dream to see such message, but the worse is the fake patient….is the promises those you get in a quandary about them after times. People who can't live up your exceptions…so, you make a world in your dreams, Ysa (one of my poem's name) in that world, there is love, there is arrival of the people who you look forward to. There is difference at last for its people. I just can say thanks. From the depth of my clunker heart. You are amazingly great and perfect. The warm heart existence, the noble soul. Ellias A.

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Maria C. Pires Costa 03 March 2013

Heartfelt poetic thread brightening other readers' soul. May your days keep being visited by that morning sun! Keep up sharing with us your emotions. All the best, Maria

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