Saturday, March 21, 2020

Let We Listen To The Kindness Of The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the increased number of homeless
In the eyes of Time
'When people's lives are wrecked
And the sea offers them
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Soran M. H
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Susan Williams 28 December 2020

I have a problem though. Part 2. I only am offered 5 poems of yours to read. Am I doing something wrong? Or have you reduced your library of poems?

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Susan Williams 28 December 2020

Once again I will try to leave a comment! Apparently I didn't score this important piece of writing the first time I read it because I just was allowed to give it a 5! Yea! !

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Luo Zhihai 22 December 2020

Sea. frog, pearl, . that's spirit of poetry

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Suresh Kumar Ek 24 October 2020

Soran, Your pen should be active When the madhouse, hospitals And graveyards are dumped With human beings. Dont tranquilise it

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Susan Williams 23 September 2020

I see the increased number of homeless In the eyes of Time 'When people's lives are wrecked- - - - - - - -oh, so many... I pray that they win through and receive more than they had asked from the community when the virus is beaten down, top marks! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 20 September 2020

This is simply fabulous.......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2020

Using sea as a metaphor you wrote a masterpiece. Yes the greed in human to earn more, to save more and all luxuries what this world can provide/have is something which is killing humanity and the sea is so big and deep, though it has all the pearls that can make everyone's life at ease/ comfort. A thought provoking poem, indeed.10+

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Valsa George 02 September 2020

When we look around, we see thousands who are homeless and starving....! While money heaps up in the hands of a few, thousands are fated to be thrown into the streets. The gap between the 'haves and have - nots' never lessens but becomes wider under every political dispensation, no matter it is Capitalism or Socialism! When man turns his back on his deprived brother, it is Nature that presents him with unexpected gifts....! The poem proclaims the compassion in you.....!

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Soran M. H 30 July 2020

Dear Rose Marie, Hello; Unfortunately the poems nowadays does not change the direction of life to better world or not interesting by anyone or provoke any issue, and this was the reason for Rimbaud to escapes from it, really it is more likely works as a personal therapy rather than any thing else, the world of reality is so painful, but always the Utopia is our dreams, well done and thanks for your lovely comment

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 July 2020

I like how this poem has been crafted . The ills of society and the helplessness of people have been depicted so vividly and brilliantly that a reader feels the injustices committed to the poorest of the poor. The picture enhanced the intensity of poignancy of this marvelous write. A great poem full of empathy. To my treasure chest. and 10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 July 2020

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message to humanity Homelessness has been one of the problems of the world today and statistics show that it is always increasing every single year. Countries especially the third world have not fully addressed this problem.

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Soran M. H 27 June 2020

Dear Susan, Hi..I wrote this poem slightly different from the rest of the poems. I wanted to express and pass my feelings to most readers in order to end the suffering of the increasing number of homeless people, while highlighting at the same time the apathy of politicians in this regard. thank you for reading my work with interest, you are brilliant

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Susan Williams 26 June 2020

I tried to find my favorite line but this poem is so well crafted that lines melt into other lines and complete and complexify the meanings of each so that I cannot break it down that way. It would be criminal to stop their flow and deflate the building emotional intensity. This poem is an entity and it is a marvel. 10++++++++++++++ and onto my fav. list Shoot I am probably going to say 10 and onto my fav list to all your poems.

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Soran M. H 16 May 2020

dear Robert M Smith, hello and thanks for your comment and your time reading my humble poem, all the best

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