I secretly preserved our love
in a bottle of fine wine,
in the cellar of my mind:
safe from the invasive present,
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Brilliant, Superb, Fantastic and I may fall short of all the adjectives I can think of and write for the wonderful Love poem....Loved it, Loved it and straight to my Fav poems. I quote: celebrating the ephemeral life, but Love defying death—defying time; savoured with tiny bits of our hearts enamoured until the end of time; on the invitation of my heart is written: ‘Let us wine and dine before we die! Let us wine and dine for a lifetime!
Enough to keep us drunk for an entire barren life out of the barrel of grapes we possess— grapes we have fermented for so long in that bountiful autumnal season of love when we could not conceive… when we could not conceive that the preservation could last a lifetime THE CRUX
I AGREE WITH BELOW RM YES IT ALONE CAN LAST A LIFE TIME ALL OTHER BOTTLES FINSIH BEFORE TIME BOTTLES OF WHITE OR ED WINE GOOD POEM MA'AM
intoxicating our spirits with the Love-spirit, evocations forever fevering in old emotions: effervescent with expectation… superb expression on love /// will be ENDED END one not all END together come, let it come on the safe trust let the heart be chum let it chime with the rhyme of life let it be the love before the end of day SUN
This is really a beautiful poem on love and dreams having touching expression and nice collocation. I appreciate the way of presentation. I want to cite here...but Love defying death—defying time; / savoured with tiny bits of our hearts enamoured / until the end of time; .. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.