Friday, January 8, 2021

Let Us Unite. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaned against the pillars draped in the twilight
I felt my inner darkness merge with your light
I am afraid to walk alone on this unfamiliar path,
It looks so empty and ruinous with wrath
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S H 15 January 2021

Togetherness is bliss.

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 January 2021

Such is your presence and recurrence. Wow

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Gordon Walter 12 January 2021

We all need companion.

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Gordon Walter 12 January 2021

We all need someone to live, share and care for in this life

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Rajeshwari 12 January 2021

A delightful poem

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Poetic Sky 12 January 2021

Remembrance is always a joy, No wonder you remind me of our sacred love Hidden so deep within our sorrow

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Now with your presence everything is joyous Such is your presence and such is your recurrence. In deep and devotion we feel relieved from all sorts of pain. You have put it into words so beautifully dear poet

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Jagdish Singh Ramana 10 January 2021

Beautiful. Philosophic write. Reflective.

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Varsha M 10 January 2021

Sir this is really beautiful poem so well placed words capurinf the Twilight's perfect blend to make the meaning so memorable...this is just awesome.

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Deepak S S 09 January 2021

Real inspiration in love poem, romantic and motivating. You motivate me to climb this steep wall Like jungle vines wraps around to reach the canopy You are my strength and you are my inspiration

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Suzon Albert 09 January 2021

Romance in the air, nice poem AsimJi.

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Kostas Lagos 09 January 2021

So romantic! Five stars!

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Zuzu Mutairi 09 January 2021

Wonderful, You are my strength and you are my inspiration Don't ever leave me alone to meander in separation.

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Shreya Hacks 08 January 2021

A wonderful live poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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