Saturday, March 27, 2021

Let Us Swim In The Sea Of The Ecstasy. Comments

Rating: 5.0

You sing a lullaby for me,
I shall dream about you.
We shall climb together on the silvery moonbeams,
And fall like a cotton candy from the translucent sky.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2021

Like full stars smile in sky dream and silvery moonbeam motivate mind. Swimming in the sea of the ecstasy, we capture light to win the darkness. An excellent poem is nicely penned. .

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 March 2021

Let us swim in the sea of ecstasy! Superb poem. Top stars Asim ji

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 March 2021

Wonderful love poem. Most romantic with finest of images and possibilities.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 28 March 2021

With appealing title you did not disappoint with the overall poem. I really liked it.

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Captain Cur 27 March 2021

A stellar pome of the ecstasies of love. Beautifully written with provocative images.

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Gordon Walter 27 March 2021

A roaring dream. Good one Asim Sir. Liked it.

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Gordon Walter 27 March 2021

A roaring dream......Loved it Asim Sir.

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Anjandev Roy 27 March 2021

This is absolutely glorious...thank u, dear friend..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 March 2021

A magnificent poem that takes us to the realm of magucal love. Superb crystalline imagery. Excellent write. To my Poem List.

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Shreya Hacks 27 March 2021

Fantastic ending...And before the Sun starts crimson journey again, Let us fall in love.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 27 March 2021

Great poem full of metaphors and imagery.

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Kostas Lagos 27 March 2021

Love can travel us through the whole universe. Splendid!

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M. Asim Nehal

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