Saturday, May 25, 2019

Let Us Share The Umbrella Comments

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Life is the journey of a dreaming man,
He doesn't know where the last station is,
He doesn't know what the destination is,
He imagines it, that's what he can,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 10 September 2019

Let us share the umbrella we both are sun burns! Everyone should say welcome to this message of peace.

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Savita Tyagi 10 July 2019

A very thought provoking poem. I read a poem by another poet who is inspired by you and realized I myself haven’t read your great poetry for a while and I know I have missed some treasures. Thank you Akhtarji for sharing your poems.

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A magnificent and powerful poem. Differences in religion/faith shall not divide. We shall be.free to believe and hope without sacrificing unity and brotherhood. A wonderful poem of great depth and a timely message for everyone.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 May 2019

The journey is nice, like twin brothers let us travel together, Let us reach our mother we may be fed in turns, Let us share the umbrella we both are sun burns! ...gives a feeling of brotherhood and friendship. Such a noble thought. Nice poem with a great message.

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