Monday, March 16, 2015

Let Us Share Our Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

We have so many beauties and a lot of charms,
We both are blessed with the lovely arms,
Walking on the narrow pavements of flowers,
Let us wet each other with the lovely showers,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Darnaryel Fantaisie 23 March 2015

That's another beautiful one! Hats off Akhtar! Really nice...

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Hazel Durham 18 March 2015

A stunning write with amazing imagery of a garden where magic and the beauty of nature holds hands to embrace each other!

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Valsa George 17 March 2015

' Let us share our hearts'.... a gentle plea to the beloved to walk in the beautiful garden adorned with flowers and greenery where butterflies flit around and birds chirp on the branches of trees. You have created a paradise like setting for the free play of love for the couple!

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Bisma Mirza 17 March 2015

Wow... Spectacular poem really! ! ! 10 on 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 16 March 2015

What a beautiful poem! ........................10

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Savita Tyagi 16 March 2015

Lovely poem. The need for a garden filled with love and peace couldn't be greater than today.

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