Sunday, November 11, 2007

Let Us Prey Comments

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It is a service we provide,
To meet an ever booming need
Of customers that are world wide,
Of all religion, race and creed.
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Ima Ryma
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Tom J. Mariani 11 November 2007

You did a good job distracking me til your last few lines. Very effective. Yet I still see them running into 7-11 with their motor running, leaving them warm in their car-seat for 'you.'

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Coreena Dejesus 11 November 2007

Wow this poem snuck up on me, I forgot what the title read when i started reading it and was in shock towards the end of the poem. Good write tho! **Hugz** CC

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