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What is" beyond capacity" ? It is " beyond our capacity" . Using " an" before " almighty" is horribly wrong! We MUST use " the" before it. How can you use " soul" in that context without the article " the" ? Also, it must be " thrust towards peace" not " for" . " Life at an ease" is terribly ungrammatical amid that stuff. You seriously don't know how to use articles and call yourself a poet!

Hey, mister, I am not a member of this site but have been critically analysing the works of the poets on this site. I'm almost as old as you. I did not fraudulently name myself, this is my real name. Your poem lacks punctuation, capitalization of letters, and the difference between a transitive and an intransitive verb.

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A beautiful prayer to the Almighty for Global Peace... let us all pray and stay as close as possible with truth as an individual Thanks for sharing Hasmukh ji! Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India, May 19,2020

How can I dislike your poetry if I can't read them? That'd be indulging in floccinaucinihilipilification. Now that I have read a few of your poems, I REGRET doing that. Don't be conceited. Just compare your poetry with that of other prominent poets like Harindhar Reddy, Valsa George, and Bharati Nayak! If you ask respectfully, I can consider mentioning the flaws in your poem.

You really think " the whole world is mad after you" ? Seriously, that very statement is spurious! The sentence should have been " the world is mad ABOUT you" . Your creations lack the very groundwork of language, grammar. I can painstakingly enumerate the grammatical mistakes in your poem if you want.

let us all pray and stay as close as possible with truth as an individual Hasmukh Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

We love your poetry very much and the way you represent your thought is unique. Our creator is greatest creator God. He gradually motivates us. He gives significant support to live. we honour him. This poem is excellently penned.

Honestly, I don't like your poetry at all, because it lacks rhythm, proper grammar, and almost all the qualities of poesy. You need to reconsider your bland style that is subpar. Don't spam the site with these poems of paltry value.

let us all pray and stay as close as possible with truth as an individual Hasmukh Mehta