Maybe we have loved too much.
Maybe we have drunk each other
Too much, too long.
So much for such a long time
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So, let us have some pain of not being loved….powerful concept and execution.
I hear 'Absence makes the heart grow fonder, " and agree with it. Everybody needs a break. Great write. Love the image. tfs
Love is a bond between passion and damnation, pleasure and torture in equal measures. Humans are complex and our relationships more so, this poem understands that in full and its message is something all of us can shake in agreement. Congratulations for Poem of the day!
I CITE here the 5th and concluding stanza: O my heart, We are so sick of each other's love. So, let us have some pain of not being loved. Come, let us kiss deep and long And then part.............................a bit odd ending, but this is love based upon A NOT ONESS OF HEART, true love won´t leave, TRUE LOVE´LL NEVER LEAVE....Sad, tragic poem, CONGRATULATIONS as MPOTD.10
Pain teaches the value of joy just as separation teaches the importance of love in togetherness. Beautifully expressed thoughts. Congratulations! Loved the painting.
Too much love has become Such a habit for us, pain for us. Now, let us have some emptiness, Some thirst, some unmet desire... wishing for pain of not being loved. very good poem.. thank u. full of emotions. tony
O my heart, We are so sick of each other's love. So, let us have some pain of not being loved. Come, let us kiss deep and long And then part......touching expression with impressive theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for POD.
The poet, Arun Maji, here speaks of the reinforcement of love. congratulations for being selected.
Very beautiful poem.....to be selected as poem of the day .. thanks
Something really strange happening here. It is shocking. Is there any saturation point in true love where we don't see, long or dream each other any more? Though, I may not agree with the lovers' resolve, I do appreciate the poem on its merits and beauty. Thanks and congrats dear poet. That we are full of each other / Now let us kiss and part. Let us have some pain / Of not being loved, not being cared.
Interesting and bored by a kind of romantic habituation, like an addict on the wane.
A good love poem along with the beautiful portrait painting.
Effect of too much of love is very well revealed in this poem! Congratulations!
from the kiss the parting grows! drunkard piece thy heart is seek some pleasure, peace within longest kiss withing longest kiss......///
A reality of love to many partners. Congrats, Arun for being selected for the day....10+++++++++++
problem of plenty...