Let us go my friend
Let us go
Into the wild
Only me and you
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the repetition helps your poem to be more enjoyable. a good write
@ Jenie: Ah! such a sweet comment by such a sweet sister of mine.Thank you sister.May you stay forever young
Good read for Liberty........Read TEEN TWEET by me..............Thanks for sharing.
You know your poems have a different scent.... good write bro.
@Siya: agreed brother agreed, , , , so do you like Poets of the fall?
@ vishal: Brother fame is like a bee it sings and it stings as well mind it
dear poet, do you know in my school everyone calls me the next chetan bhagat, and i just give them a smile, saying let me finish first engineering and then state otherwise am nothing. its high time i should apply my mind on lattice energy or electron gain enthalpy or rydberg constant... but, heart spares some time for writing poems gud to see you here, bro.
That feeling separates poets from other people, the poetic talent is special and has a same feeling to every poet around the world.....that joy you get after finishing a poem is unbelievable bro.....thank you! ! b Siya_! !
Gracious Siya, , , , when you do things from your soul you feel a river flowing in you, , a joy...I feel the same when i write poems......Thanks a lot
I like your poem and the repetition made me enjoy it more. Siya_! !
you know life is like mist its cold its confusing because you have no idea where the way is so sometimes you wait for someone to come and help you but it never happens so what are you suppose to do, well i say get up and find a way, how? well dream, have hope and that is your way out...bravo sir well played with words