Friday, June 28, 2013

Let Us Go Comments

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Let us go my friend
Let us go
Into the wild
Only me and you
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The moody blue
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Payal Parande 14 November 2013

you know life is like mist its cold its confusing because you have no idea where the way is so sometimes you wait for someone to come and help you but it never happens so what are you suppose to do, well i say get up and find a way, how? well dream, have hope and that is your way out...bravo sir well played with words

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Heather Wilkins 26 July 2013

the repetition helps your poem to be more enjoyable. a good write

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The Moody Blue 03 July 2013

@ Jenie: Ah! such a sweet comment by such a sweet sister of mine.Thank you sister.May you stay forever young

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Soumita Sarkar 03 July 2013

Good read for Liberty........Read TEEN TWEET by me..............Thanks for sharing.

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Jenie Franksay 03 July 2013

You know your poems have a different scent.... good write bro.

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The Moody Blue 30 June 2013

@Siya: agreed brother agreed, , , , so do you like Poets of the fall?

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The Moody Blue 30 June 2013

@ vishal: Brother fame is like a bee it sings and it stings as well mind it

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Vishal Sharma 30 June 2013

dear poet, do you know in my school everyone calls me the next chetan bhagat, and i just give them a smile, saying let me finish first engineering and then state otherwise am nothing. its high time i should apply my mind on lattice energy or electron gain enthalpy or rydberg constant... but, heart spares some time for writing poems gud to see you here, bro.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 June 2013

That feeling separates poets from other people, the poetic talent is special and has a same feeling to every poet around the world.....that joy you get after finishing a poem is unbelievable bro.....thank you! ! b Siya_! !

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The Moody Blue 30 June 2013

Gracious Siya, , , , when you do things from your soul you feel a river flowing in you, , a joy...I feel the same when i write poems......Thanks a lot

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 June 2013

I like your poem and the repetition made me enjoy it more. Siya_! !

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