Saturday, January 14, 2017

Let Us Go Back To The Caves Comments

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Ah! How we are suffocating behind the walls of hates,
come on, let us sit somewhere else among the flowers.
My moon! Let me lull you to the dreams where you can fly freely,
why should wait for our deaths in this market of terror,
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 January 2017

Translated poetically superb. Why are Pakistanis killing so much.? Do they think it is ok to kill? Why can't they live peacefully? Who is misguiding them? U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too titled, 'pay a visit to a riverbank, pls do

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 January 2017

Translated poetically superb. Why are Pakistanis killing so much.? Do they think it is ok to kill? Why can't they live peacefully? Who is misguiding them?

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M Asim Nehal 15 January 2017

A wonderful translation of a equally wonderful poem....10++++

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Khalid Saifullah 14 January 2017

A lovely translation of a great poem..........................................................

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