I feel exiled
From motherland for while
The blame war is on
The golden days are gone
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Very strong Mary Musick21 minutes ago The poem is very strong. I can feel the aggravation and want. Good Job. Comment +1
well written trevor headley20 minutes ago A very good insight into the problems of today Comment +1
Government corruption and the frustration of how many people deserve more. Lindsay Hetrick18 minutes ago It had a good tone and ring to it, I like the cadence. Careful to not rhyme like words (ie change and change) The subject matter is an interesting one, however I feel more depth can be added. Comment +1
Golden days are gone..... Don't give up, they will come again 10 Jun by Seema Chowdhury to Let us fulfill