Thursday, August 6, 2009

Let Us Dream Together Comments

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Even we can't,
walk and breathe together,
we can dream together,
and cross every line,
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Rafique Farooqi
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Rehana Nazli 06 August 2009

Our dream may not match with each other But we can dream.... Your poem is an invitation to dream which I suppose is lovely idea.

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Ejaz Khan 06 August 2009

A lovely idea and metaphor, well penned!

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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