Let Us Dream Shall We? Comments

Okay now we see your different style. I think this is good! But could be great! like: that brillaint sun IS SHE THE SUN SAY SO or ID SHE MAKE YOU SEE THE SUNLIGHT FOR THE FIRST TIME? This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow That few have seen and only you will know. THAT FEW HAVE SEEN OF ME THEY WAY ONLY YOU WILL Is that what you are saying that she know the side of you that no one knows? that hot and poetically potent, so if it is clear it up for the reader. Every poem should be put away for a few days and then read freshly when you are in your writers brain! Doing great, keep messaging me if you cn stand me!