Friday, July 20, 2012

Let Us Dance! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The memory dances to the tune of the wind,
The energy elevates with hormonal scent,
Solo dancers start to dance in their dreams,
Climes change the temperature as the streams,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Eric Cockrell 26 July 2012

the dance of the ecstatic... very good thythm here!

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Rajendran Muthiah 22 July 2012

Excellent dancing images are created in this poem.It deserves more than five stars. The dance of memories to the tune of mind, energy elevation, solo dancers, Change of temperature by climes and streams, the wandering souls, ...and all kinds of cosmic dances are the creations of wonderful faculties of your imaginative mind.The repeating dependent clauses of the cosmic dance make the rising rhythm moving fast.Wonderful.

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King Big Head 20 July 2012

Yes I like this, a very good poem, I like to dance, I am fantastic dancer.

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Captain Cur 20 July 2012

A souls progress and journey through eternity with undertones of reincarnation, Remembering, expressing through experience and fulfilling of potential. These were my thoughts as I read this interesting poem.

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