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Ayesha Nigam likes this. Ayesha Nigam I absolutely loved the ending, especially the last line. Holds a lot of meaning. Loved reading it! 7 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

Your poem seems to convey encouraging thoughts and hope regarding youth. They do need it these days, in particular all those who have been working a lot, having qualified from University, yet no employment in their horizons... I've also enjoyed the rhyme structure achieved.

It did pose a problem But did not concern them