Let Them Chase You…. Comments

Ah, your choice of words has me baffled. I love the 'butterfly' in poems, yet i've never been able to get that analogy quite right. I really like this one, and the truth of it is so prevelant. You're so wanted then you find the one you want... and what happens? Murphy's law. They dump you. Ah this poem was refreshing in a way. Love it. Gabriela

Your narration is impeccable. You have dealt beautifully on a complex subject - relationship. I like the way you carried the theme to the end.