Monday, January 11, 2016

Let The Words Be Comments

Rating: 5.0

As thoughts tumble from my pen,
Who is collecting the words,
Scrutinizing, dissecting them
Until they cry like wounded birds?
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Lora Colon
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Jak Black 12 January 2016

Wow! This is a cracker, Lora. A beautifully written poem. The rhythm and rhyming are faultless. The message expressed here is penetrating. Well done, Lora.

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Kassem Oude 11 January 2016

As long as there's burning coal'n heart It means that heart and soul still live One should swallow some bitter tart with little delight like take and give.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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