.let The Tears Coming Down From Our Eyes... Comments

Aww this is so sweet. I love how you make love the most important thing ever. You just make it...possible for people to fall in love and be in it for a very long time....enjoying the other person's embrace and quality time. I love it -Tyease

A very good write dear.......you have drawn a picture of teenage love with simple yet, sound words........The description of your loved one and then the pouring out of sad emotions upon seperaiton is really nice......This poem has kept a messege in it of moving on with life if someone fails to attain the love of his or her adored one....and that is how it should be because life never stops for anyone......a compact inspirational poem................10

i'm sorry you cannot be with your loved one. But this is a beautiful poem and i feel the emotion bounching off the screen. i wish you the best of luck -stephanie by the way 10++

Sorry if I showed that I had no care for you Coz I have care more than you ever thought u cannot say that, instead say i hadn`t care for u and u should have said see instead of saw

i do like ur poem but there r some not important mistakes that u need to fix''only spellings''

yea it is a sad poem i like it because its real thats what ussually hapen in real life, nice one.

a very touching write indeed...its an old saying that time is the only and best cure and i wish it will sooth you soon....thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

nice poem dear Hataw: you started the poem with love and great passion. i like that and i impressed in that love, aaaah i think that is the most beautiful thig in the world, , , , LOVE your writting are amazing and this way and words about love as i said, i really impressed. but and for sorry it was end by goodbye ooh that painfully. anyway in general your poem is perfect but saaaad.

this is so cool i almost wished i was there to watch such a lovely scene of love well desired but left unspoken to watch the tear trikle and fall but never let it drop good luck mate love is what keeps me going. love and never let go

a lovely but sad love story. saying goodbyes are always hard i believe.good luck to you and hope you can get what you wish for.

Ahhhhhhhhh.........................................my heart skips beating! How lovely is your love, your true true love Hataw.A very touching piece and you have touched my heart! ! ! ! !

This person must be fool if he can't acknowledge your sweetness and love 10/10

Does this person who makes you so sad know that you have this site? If he did, I am sure he would be willing to try again... Good poem, Hataw, I enjoy you sad poems... :)

wow great job i can understand how that feels feel free to message me anytime

In this set there's a lot of pain and it's good to respect it.

very touchy poem hataw! beautifully expressed.+++++++10 Real love if conflux between two, then, need devotion/sacrifice from both side. If lack, then, that love isn't pure. I would like paste here the comment 2 days before I posted on other poet's poem. I think, there is a msg for all. that's - ''Dear pal, I would like to say here something regarding LOVE which is actually my thoughts of these days. For worshiper of one God, love has tremendous value. A (1) play significant role which I articulate 1+1=1(seemingly a foolish sum :)) God the origin of love. We hav got code how to practice love. He knows we misuse our ‘free will’. So, has given code of life. Besides love’s many face- A ‘she’ a ‘he’ according God’s code, can make tremendous lovely story, lovely history! There are examples in the history. But, if, In the name of love, a ‘she’ a ‘he’ practice so called ‘love’ which seems is influenced by polytheism and signify nothing but instigate enimity, is that love? Is emotional infidelity/emotional bond which is against God’s system/emotional embrace is really LOVE? We see, there are ‘he’ and ‘she’ trying to unlawful embrace of ‘love’ which actually embrace jungle civilization in many ways. Trying to capture attention saying ‘convinced’/’can’t control’ which truly caotic/disturbing for social harmony. Surprisingly, I have seen, lovers in the name of peace ignite fighting! Yes, there are, true devoted lover, who really create examples of pure love for all! They are blessed indeed. No other option swich on, just ‘fana filla’ for one! People become astonish seeing their pure love! There is a general love for all, that’s sacred too. That’s actually love for humanity which endorsed by God. We need to value separately LOVE’s multi faced exposition which can not cross the border. Just my thoughts have placed here dear pal! ''

That must have been a difficult decision to make. To deceive the one you love, for the sake of what you believe is good and right. I'm guessing that your loved one may have known how much you care...and hoepfully you can stay in each other's hearts forever. Hugs, Dee

very beautiful. sad story, but beautifully written. fanastic job.10

awh! ! I! ! ! ! ! ! its so beautiful---so tuchhhhhhhhhhy-- Im crying Hataw with you. Yes really Im crying--- wish this never happens with you again or with any one lovely write +++10 love anju

sometimes it happen and when it does..it rains...thats natural for emotional despair..it is a part of life...good conept..nicely described...A10 Ency Bearis