Sunday, October 15, 2006

Let The Sun Shine - Triolet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let the sun shine brightly each day,
Warming us deeply in our soul,
We are happy it's here to stay
Let the sun shine brightly each day,
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Ernestine Northover
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Suryendu Chaudhury 04 November 2020

Beautiful lines with a hint of hope.

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Ernest Makuakua 28 December 2015

let the sun shine warming us deeply in our our souls beautiful

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Andrew Blakemore 22 July 2008

A beautiful rhythmical piece of work Ernestine, A real treasure. Love Andrew xxx

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Francesca Johnson 08 May 2007

Glad to read that the sun is shining for you, Ernestine. This poem, and the way you put it across, does the same thing for me. Love, Fran xxx

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Sid John Gardner. 07 May 2007

Nice one Ernestine. Sid John xxx

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Duncan Wyllie 19 October 2006

I found this poem to be very moving and saw the sun as a life giving source that was healing and energizing the heart and mind BEAUTIFUL ART DISPLAYED BY A LOVELY LADY Love duncan X

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Tailor Bell 16 October 2006

a beautiful piece I'll take to heart today, thanks Ernestine. -Tailor

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Catastrophe King 15 October 2006

That was very sweet and simple... I loved the way you have used the language, it is not easy to be SIMPLE. Thank you Ernestine..... a simple 10 for you here!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 October 2006

POETESS E.>>>What a fine & beautiful Sunday Poem...Light, mellow & pleasant to the Eye's'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 15 October 2006

You make this 'event' seem so easy to do! And in reality, it is. Very nice Ernestine. L

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Melvina Germain 15 October 2006

Thankyou Ernestine, this is truly beautiful, a lovely way to start the day.------Melvina---

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