Monday, June 26, 2017

Let The Sun Rise Comments

Rating: 4.9

Let love be, you unsolicited traveller
For you have fallen and tastes the gates of hades
Beware the prince of darkness declares war with love
Let love be, you tailed, horned being.
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Adolf Baloyi
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Chinedu Dike 14 November 2019

A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful work of art nicely penned with spiritual insight. Remain enriched, bro.

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Let the sun rise for love and great thoughts in this poem.

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Tom Allport 30 June 2017

a wonderful poem that sends out a strong lovely message? ...................well written.

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Adolf Baloyi 28 June 2017

Thanks chief....hope you enjoyed it

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 27 June 2017

lovely write and good composition

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Adolf Baloyi 14 July 2017

Ngiyabonga'. thanks a million times

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