Let The Story Foretell Comments

I like the repetition of the words PEACE and ANCESTRAL DRUM – your choice of words and presentation are striking and evokes a feeling of sadness in the reader, tempered with the hope that you will find a solution by looking into your roots and finding your true self again. Great work, kind regards, Margaret And wind blow gently to our nation with PEACE PEACE circulate our field of the world TREMBLE WITH FEAR Our ANCESTRAL DRUM is SOUNDLESS to our culture. Let them know our ANCESTRAL DRUM.

well written poem and well expressed ideas to convey the message 10

'My clan and my niece Keep the old age world Place it deeply in blood before old age bird fly out.' The ceteris paribus or central idea resonating in the poem.Let the world know the culture and inheritance from your old and experienced eyes.Let us hope for the cudgel to be given by god to you.Wonderful way of thinking and bent of mind.a 10 from me.

I thought this was a very thoughtful piece about the recognition of what is missing from your culture today. The wisdom of the old is needed desperately by your people. I sense this in your call. A wonderful presentation. GW62