Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Let The Love Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

Words are worth choking for
Just to let the secret out of the throat
Feels like thousand knives stabbing through the heart
Let the blood fill up
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Aiden Florence
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Dimensions drench itself in cold blood Tears break apart Love falls apart Until there’s nothing left here to live for ^^my favorite, in this you've captured the sense of pain, and i love it very good.. x3, mill

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Janelle Morehart 15 November 2007

Wow how tragic yet so beautiful. Sorta like watching a car crash, its a horrible thing but you can't look away. Not that Im saying your poem is a car crash haha, it just catches your attention like one. I love it! Such great work as usual, Keep it up!

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Casey Gauthier 08 November 2007

hey that's a good one. I really like the first lines. :)

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