Like a glow-worm of blue night
Let dreams wink as a divine boon
O'er my gloomy life in this full moon
To strew my lorn path with golden light
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the artistry shows through the lines, , , n by a little effort you could have given it a definite form of a sonnet.... but it's fine, , , since a poem can't be written on gun-point, , , it follows its impulsive drive from somewhere inside...the poem comprises many beautiful lines...
Love seen like a light that filled in the sight of soul.Nice poem..Cristina Teodor
None could find my tears as they were like a sea. Sometimes me too feel the same! ! ! ! excellent poem...
Blown away with this romantic hope poem, even it sounds a bit restless and dark at last line but i know the real meaning is highly than any words can imagine...it never makes moonlight lose the light when you sad at night because it will still tell you to smile always, like it moon smile tonight hahahaha..blue moon, blue night and golden light WOW what expressive words you made here..i like them :) _Unwritten Soul
a beautiful poem, good write..