Wednesday, May 3, 2006

Let The Dove Fly Comments

Rating: 4.8

As the sun set in the west
in blaze of pastels.
She faced the east;
dusk cast the world in blue.
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Joyce Chelmo
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Duncan Wyllie 28 May 2006

OH! The atmosphere was tremendous in this one, such a spiritual feel to it, a calming Beautiful, REALLY! Love duncan X

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Gregory Gunn 04 May 2006

A terse, straight to the point, stylish rendering. The symbol of peace, the dove provides peace at the conclusion. Well done, Joyce! Greg

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Hugh Cobb 03 May 2006

Dear Red, Very nice indeed. This is a very compact and precise poem. Images are clean and the message is clear and is offered as a gift to the reader. Just as the palms are opened and the symbolic dove flies away, so the poem is given to its audience. Beautiful writing, Best, Hugh

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