As the sun set in the west
in blaze of pastels.
She faced the east;
dusk cast the world in blue.
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A terse, straight to the point, stylish rendering. The symbol of peace, the dove provides peace at the conclusion. Well done, Joyce! Greg
Dear Red, Very nice indeed. This is a very compact and precise poem. Images are clean and the message is clear and is offered as a gift to the reader. Just as the palms are opened and the symbolic dove flies away, so the poem is given to its audience. Beautiful writing, Best, Hugh
OH! The atmosphere was tremendous in this one, such a spiritual feel to it, a calming Beautiful, REALLY! Love duncan X