Friday, June 27, 2008

Let The Dance Begin Comments

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Finally, I see you.
I gaze upon your beauty slowly looking for every flaw but I find none.
I listen for any trembling in your voice but I find none.
I feel the power of your stare and I know there is strength there.
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Rose Falcone 03 July 2008

Bravo Sir Derek! ! ! 'Let the dance begin! ' I love it! What tender sentiment! What a lucky girl! Would've given it an eleven but a ten had to suffice! Please do keep writing! Rosie

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