Saturday, October 15, 2005

Let The Canons Be Silent. Comments

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Let the ravaging sounds of the canons be silent,
the rancorous dictators stopped,
rankled suicide bombers pacified
with the ranishing sounds of the aves,
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Austin Jeffrey
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 15 October 2005

Beautiful and so true....wish more could see and feel this way.

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Max Reif 15 October 2005

There's some nice word-play here, Austin. As well as a few more spelling glitches. I think you mean 'ravishing', 'onslaught', 'de-mystified' (easy to change in the poem's edit mode)

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Oro Politics 15 October 2005

Surely you mean cannons, my dear Austin!

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