Wednesday, May 14, 2014

Let The Candles Lit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Calm my friend, the sky is fighting the unfriendly dark,
Don't come in the way of a deadly shark.
The seas and oceans are knitting a net, for the giant evil,
Soon you will see the end of the dominant devil.
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Khalida Bano Ali 05 February 2015

A beautiful poem............................10

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Savita Tyagi 22 May 2014

A lovely poem full of Hope and assurance. Dawn awaits behind darkness always. Thank you for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 22 May 2014

Lovely poem of Hope and assurance. Dawn awaits always behind darkness.

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Ramesh Rai 16 May 2014

Let the candle of modesty alwasys glow. A beautiful ink Sir.

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Debbie Casey 15 May 2014

incredible poem - thank you for sharing...

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Matthias Pantaleon 15 May 2014

Its amazing how just one candle stick can light up an entire room. Nicely penned with solid metaphor

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Colleen Courtney 14 May 2014

A very beautifully written poem. Nicely done.

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Sarmad Mirza 14 May 2014

Such a Nice poem! ! Great Words Great Thinking

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