Sunday, June 23, 2013

Let The Bad Girl Win Now And Then Comments

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She seems a little wild once in a while,
But men are nice just once or twice.
Then forgiving is the best part of love,
And it’s flavored by bad girl’s spice.
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Albert Price
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Kristina Stockamp 23 June 2013

Well done- I might remove most in the first stanza line 6, then change And to Yet in line 7.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 June 2013

good write, thanks, I like it.

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Albert Price

Albert Price

Washington DC
Albert Price
Albert Price
Washington DC
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