Monday, July 17, 2017

Let Spring Come - Love, Love, Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The seed of love is lying in my heart
the clouds are becoming heavy
the air has become cool and breezy
mountains stands tall and steady
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M. Asim Nehal
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Denis Mair 16 November 2023

Yes, the mood of springtime often rushes like sudden gusts of wind.

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 February 2023

Excellent poem refreshing always.

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Martinez Salotori 29 January 2022

Amusing poem, I liked the flow and wordings.

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Poetic Sky 16 March 2023

Truly magnificent poem.

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Ricky Magnathen 13 November 2021

Congratulation once again.

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Tihama Hykam 14 October 2021

All the way spring season.

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Poetic Sky 13 September 2021

Wonderful poem on love..

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Li Su Pen 06 July 2021

This is too beautiful song for the spring!

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Shreya Hacks 22 June 2021

The seed of love is lying in my heart the clouds are becoming heavy...

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Poetic Sky 22 May 2021

I love spring season and you beautified it.

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Deepak S S 20 May 2021

Best season. enjoyable.

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Ramjha Kukura 20 May 2021

Great line: And my hopes are floating on waves the leaves are rustling so my wishes

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 May 2021

I can't say anything but pure poetic perfection

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me poet yeps poet 15 May 2021

the breeze carries the fragrance and in seconds the spring zooms JUST WOW

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luz hanaii 07 May 2021

Lovely imagery, nicely penned, thanks for sharing.

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S H 26 April 2021

Pure poem on nature we hardly see it in modern times.

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Zumas Millamo 24 April 2021

Fabulous poem on spring season. Seasonal best poem.

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Varsha M 21 April 2021

Oh my God. This is profound sir How paradoxical you wove love into spring. Beautiful poem. Heart touching.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 April 2021

I have come across this poem again, I had been looking for this cutest poem! I cite your two last lines here: the breeze carries the fragrance and in seconds the spring zooms True mesmerizing, dear Asim Sir! 5 Stars full for this Tribute to Spring, I can feel the love sphere in the air. Fantastic!

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Shreya Hacks 16 April 2021

Niche poem. Truly magical.

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Gordon Walter 27 March 2021

My favourite season spring.

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