Let`s Wait Comments

A fine concept and poem.

Waiting for the Godot! Try reading my love poems to enjoy and comment as well. Thank u

Well detailed poem, now i know a bit about your tradition and belief, i was watching that on TV but here you give more detail with your nice description...and your work is great! _Unwritten Soul

Definitely a thought provoking and touching write that clearly shows your talent and sensitive feelings! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and please, keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

Much awaited splendid writee.Nicely penned.

excellent work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This poet emotionally writes from heart to burn Flame rising above High and higher. Again a chanting! Oh! each getting louder than the previous. A Hindu chanting, Ah! gently loosing my soul to sky and deeply a mourn released from mother`s womb, Somewhere in household nearer, Swarnedu made words mixed with touchable heights

This poet emotionally writes from heart to burn Flame rising above High and higher. Again a chanting! Oh! each getting louder than the previous. A Hindu chanting, Ah! gently loosing my soul to sky and deeply a mourn released from mother`s womb, Somewhere in household nearer, Swarnedu made words mixed with touchable heights

some review of spellings is in order....but at bubbling 21, dear friend, dont dwell on death and mortality.....there are brighter things of life to write on and muse about...any way all the best...a brilliant piece....

A really wonderful poem, really like it. a great write.

I like the Hindu funeral’s ritual the way you have portrayed it and the way you depicted our life-cycle in a Hindu society. Thanks for sharing.

A beautiful, well versed poem with a creative attitude. keep it up

what an enchanting poem, meaningful, and very creative! I loved how you mentioned your Hindu-tradition so smoothly.

A high sense of narrative technique for this poem with some good touches of language. The last few lines greatly sum up the overall message and the pacing changes speed quite naturally. Good work