Monday, November 16, 2020

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Rating: 5.0

Fish cant fly,
Birds cant swim,
Trees dont even walk.
There is an equilibrium, a balance in life.
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Unwritten Soul
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Anjandev Roy 14 July 2024

Brilliant piece..... thanks for sharing... dear poet.

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Susan Williams 19 February 2021

If u were a bird, fly to the stars, If u were a fish, dive deeper than light could do, If you stand as a tree, your branches are free-----returned to read again---there is such joy and innocence in this lovely poem! '

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Susan Williams 17 January 2021

I give this 5 stars because I cannot give it more! I am going to favorite it as well---cuz this poem is so well constructed and written and it whispers to me!

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Susan Williams 17 January 2021

I love what you wrote and how you wrote it

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Varsha M 25 December 2020

Yes these words are true and even your notes. Finding our strengths builds us to tackle well and discovering weaknesses reflects a clear guidelines to rethink and plan well to advance in a different direction. Very inspiring. Thank-you so much.

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Muhammad Ali 07 December 2020

A nice and lovely poem. And what it is missing, added in poet's note. That is, it is a poem for you, being a friend of someone. For everyone, it is a poem for me, for every-me.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

That so sweet of you, thanks my friend

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2020

Wow this is one of your best poems, so wonderfully said! ! It inspires to use our potential however we have been made. Kudos! ! Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, babies cry anywhere "

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Hi Zaynab, i forget to prompt u a reply, thanks and i did read and comment your beautiful work too

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