A heart that is throbbing in an exaggerated way,
A pair of hands sweating with anxiety when they collide
Emotions that are upset by that light,
That lights up when I look into your gaze.
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Read your poem again. It has no poetic beauty. Then read more good poems. You obviously just throw your poems together as if they were paint. Unfortunately, no decent painting appears.
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Read your poem again. It has no poetic beauty. Then read more good poems. You obviously just throw your poems together as if they were paint. Unfortunately, no decent painting appears.
I'm sorry you feel that way