Sunday, June 18, 2017

Let's Talk About It Comments

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My mother died on February 24 2016, when she was traveling on the entrance ramp to northbound I-29 from Mexico City Avenue. She traveled off the roadway and overcorrected, sending herself and her truck down an embankment. Ejected from her vehicle, she was dead on arrival.
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CrowThePoet 16 August 2018

What the f...u....ck is going on with this site. I was kicked off now I am running hot hot. Look at me poems Judy and The Crow are worth buying at Amazon.

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Michael Walker 16 August 2018

Extremely good for a first, tragic poem, written in the long lines I prefer. You are right about how dangerous it is to text or talk on a phone while driving. To do that divides your attention, maybe fatally. It is compulsory to wear a seat belt in my country and I think it is an effective safety measure. Having airbags inside the car might help too, although my own have never inflated. Sorry to hear of your mother's passing.

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Denis Mair 16 August 2018

You were brave to read this at a poetry slam. Thanks for your pleas that deserve serious consideration. Too often we allow our thinking to be hijacked by tools of communication and transport. I think the highways are a death trap where.we expose ourselves to random danger due to distraction. .

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Crowthepoet 16 August 2018

Not as brave as me hee hee is a good thing

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2018

A real eye opener to all those restless people who use cell phones while driving. How distraction for a fraction of a second can cause fatal accidents. Very nice write. A strong message to all. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard Snyder 16 August 2018

You are right about how everyone's always in such a rush. I too wonder why we as people won't slow down. Good insight. Well done Lauryn.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 August 2018

'Let's talk about how a text can wait' - Yes, certainly we should do so. A second's distraction can bring an end to many lives and a life time bereavement for the surviving members of the families.

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The Crow 16 August 2018

My b..u..m is still sore after being raped by the control freaks who run his site. That is Indian Central. They hurt my Judy who I love dearly. They will pay.

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The Crow 16 August 2018

I'm coming after you f..u..c..k..en clowns trying to defame Judy.

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Andy* 16 August 2018

I could not be more disgusted with BLATHERWICK I pray for her.

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Look up my name and buy from Amazon Poems Of Judy and the Crow. Thank you all Judy

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 August 2018

The fastness for unknown something we face this hideous incident everywhere. Really this is written so pathetically. Yes let's talk about it

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The Truth 16 August 2018

Not a good choice but what can you expect from the Indian d..i...c..ks that run this schomozzle of a poetry site.

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The Crow 16 August 2018

They raped us both. My b..u..m is still sore. How's yours

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The Truth 16 August 2018

They are child rapists like all the men on this site. Crow darling you are exempted.

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Robert M Smith 16 August 2018

Im a child molester

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Judith Blatherwick 16 August 2018

Has exposed herself to the world as a serial troll.

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Judy And The Crow 16 August 2018

Are one and the same why has she commented on this poor girl's poem? In such a disgusting manner.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 August 2018

A very useful and informative write! Congrats for this valuable piece of work being chosen as Poem Of the Day!

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Akhtar Jawad 16 August 2017

We should think and talk about it. A good selection as members poem of the day. Congrats.

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Rajnish Manga 16 August 2017

Everybody knows the hazard involved in texting a message while driving a car. So many deaths are caused by it annually but nobody seems to care. Quite a terrible experience. Thanks for highlighting the risk based on the tragic incident in your own family.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 August 2017

Hi Lauryn, Yes! Let us talk about it! ! ! It is time somebody told the teens, not just in the US, but in India too, to avoid using phone while driving. Laws simply do not help. may be, some talk helps....Thank you.....................

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2017

Death! ! With the muse of life. Accident! Get hope and be strong! ! Able to move forward. Safety! ! Learning the lessons of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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This poem carries a very important safety measure for everyone..Pay attention so you don't cause an accident.Very strongly written good for you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2017

A driver mustn't use cell phone at the time of driving as it may create subject to death. Through this poem you have brought awareness is acceptable. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulations for the poem of the day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2017

Young generation should take lesson from this write. How using cellphones while driving may cause fatal accidents and people are dying world over for this. It is a matter of just few minutes to reach your destination. While driving one should always be attentive. Thanks for posting such a nice poem.10+++

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