Let's See The Sun Descending! Comments
Come with me
on the edge of life!
Come let's do something new and think,
and unfurl the brave new world;
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Really great poem. some great lines, lets go and touch those abstract dreams Fantastic line.
ahh! u have made me remember the lines...... A poet could not but be gay In such a jocund company
Life is like this exactly. We never know where we will be in the next minute. Life is a dream. If you dream of beauty, harmony, kindness, you get it. Just dream on lovely places and you will find the way to get there.
where is the dale of deep sleep you know? where dwell the slumbers sweet? where do the dreams of joys come from? I like these lines...and have to find my answers..... An excellent poem! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++
A beautigul poem, rich in imagery, opening so many challenges in so many questions...'let's go and see the sun descending' is such a wonderful thought. TFS. Bless you.
Yeah come on join us to watching the sun descending, and wait for moon ascending :) ..i like it! we will try many things for new life to think Shahzia...if possible we will wrap stars around the globe, belt with rainbows till the colors and shine drawn and immersed in the sea we gonna see bright shines earth and colorful land beautiful as what we dream isnt Shahzia? hahaha Keep dreaming but we must put reality as our basement :) Keep on writing and inspire us_Unwritten Soul
But before we depart on this fairy journey let us once peep with what blessing is this ink blessed and thank it for giving us a dropp of it which our little grasp cannot hold all. Poetry is an all in all pic of the poets thoughts, i wonder with what ease you think. Regards :)
Chances to discover. Endless opportunities, just for the taking. The sky is the limit. A really encouraging poem.
This poem stands like an invitation letter that has no boundaries, but promising horizons of hopes, love and adventure.if people under different skies can be brought under one lovelit umbrella, it would be the solution for all wars arisen out of caste n religion.more properly saying: god created human, human made religions and finally humans along with religion started wars.
The natural setting presenting the vibrant state of mind, the clarion call for exploring the new horizon of love all cast a spell.Indeed a superb job!
daring amazing and absolutely demonic in feral love.... Shakespearean old world charm...... what metaphor.....the lines seem to just rise up on their own.... dance in trance...alive throbbing vivacious. a celebration of love..... from cupid his choice arrow congrats dear poet. you have done a marvel here cheers :)
''where is the dale of deep sleep you know? where dwell the slumbers sweet? '' ''dale of deep sleep '' ''dwell the slumbers sweet'' all these are excellent phrases, this is the curiosity of heart to know the unknown, by putting the question you enhanced the beauty of sleep and slumbers.....an excellent poem, i love it.
Powerful, touching uplifting poem. The beauty in the seen and unseen worlds.
There is one bengali song - at the dusk the tired birds are returning to their nests as if they have forgotten their path. the descending sun is so beautiful that can be imagined like the angel coming down on earth.
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8/3/2025 3:48:42 PM # 1.0.0
The mysteries of life are engrossing, also baffling! Men through ages have been in an eternal quest to unravel the riddles of life and existence! Let us join this train of explorers travelling to realms far! A very absorbing write!