Tuesday, December 5, 2017

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I'm under nourished
You're over nourished
I'm the prey
You're the predator
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Binayakumar Mohanty
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 December 2017

We have been left here just to see the judgement day, never to foresee, never to repent. So is the fight against the fate, against whom none of our resources or strong points stand erect. It can erect any frigid, it can resurrect a G spot anywhere, be it a skin or a chin or a screen of sins we love to commit. Thanks for the poem.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2017

I'm the prey, you're the predator-You have exquisitely expressed the utter state of predicament in its candid perspective dear Binaya...10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 05 December 2017

Thanks dear sir for your valuable comments.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 December 2017

Binaya, such an interesting write...10+++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 05 December 2017

Thanks dear poet for such inspiration.

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