Let's Proceed Poem by me poet yeps poet

Let's Proceed

Rating: 5.0


Why await the anointed hour

the end is preceded
by the coming

''Isolated Tree
If I be that member
standing in the wilderness
stark lonely
like a stem in a desert
by the side of an oasis

fore torn
abandoned

What worth then would be
my very being
having been
often I wondered alone

stripped of all intelligence
sheared of all arms and leaves
and nuances of life's awards

Had I lead a life
worthy of my salt

Friday, September 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note This is my first dream I catured composing while dreaming scanning through others laptops
Believe me I scribbled quickly
now I have edited
Hope you will spread its fragrance
for miles
for all to breathe
INHALE if you will
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2018

Isolated tree can also grow more and more when this gets nutrients of love. Spreading fragrance is nice to spread love. Wonderful poem is well penned...10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 September 2018

such a wonderful vision of thine sublime

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 September 2018

Such a remarkable write...........................

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