Let's play a game
Of courtships once again.
Wooing like stranger I press upon you
With intend of intimate emotions
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. A beautiful love poem powerfully and movingly penned.
line 4: maybe " intention" ? " I lie upon the thorn of rejection" Ouch! ! i like the image! but: " My undying desire with me" the wording doesn't sound correct to me I think you DO mean " Here rejection" but it could be " Her" ? Romance was never a game i played, but it could be i'm sure, at least for one of a pair. bri ;)