Wednesday, June 24, 2020

Let's Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Constant coming winds picking the petals
Dormant heart tearing the faded sky
Fluent stream seeking aura in the ray
Intent rain dries the particles of sigh
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Rebecca Navarre 13 February 2021

Wow! .. Beautifully painted with beautiful heart! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ......

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 June 2020

A beautifully penned wonderful poem. Simply delightful.....10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 June 2020

Mankind on earth! ! Let us love and care for each other! Without racism. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 25 June 2020

seeking aura in the ray........significant. anjandev roy.

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Dominic Windram 24 June 2020

Excellent poem Mahtab which uses beautiful language to address the horrors of racism...it's a 10 from me!

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