This morning you knocked at my door.
Rock in hand, smile on face,
You pounded at my skull.
...
Read full text
Wow! This one is amazing! Your first few lines hook the reader in and the journey that follows is fascinating and open to many possible interpretations. A strongly crafted personal piece with some memorable images and a powerful emotional core. Welcome to the site. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Utterly fantastic poem. So descriptive that I found myself contoring my face with anger right from the begining (Rock in hand, smile on face - You pounded at my skull) . Remarkable. Thanks for sahring it with us. 10