Sunday, March 18, 2007

Let’s Go Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

This morning you knocked at my door.
Rock in hand, smile on face,
You pounded at my skull.
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Laoibhse Ni Canain
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Stone Granite 12 May 2008

Utterly fantastic poem. So descriptive that I found myself contoring my face with anger right from the begining (Rock in hand, smile on face - You pounded at my skull) . Remarkable. Thanks for sahring it with us. 10

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Alison Cassidy 28 March 2007

Wow! This one is amazing! Your first few lines hook the reader in and the journey that follows is fascinating and open to many possible interpretations. A strongly crafted personal piece with some memorable images and a powerful emotional core. Welcome to the site. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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