Monday, April 7, 2014

Let’s Go Back Comments

Rating: 4.5

Are you listening my dear-
It’s evening now,
The sun is setting fast
Darkness will be looming all over the wood.
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 21 October 2014

Playing hide and seek in a forest after dark, a good way of not being found. Perfect imagery of death, when you look for your love, insisting that she come and hold your hand, yet she cannot. Not wanting death to play this game with you any longer, having had enough, just wanting your love to be found and brought back to you. This is an amazing picture of how death keeps our loved ones from us when their lives are ended on earth. Very poignant and tender, poem, Amitava. Beautiful expression of your feelings hidden in this forest of poetical words. I give it many 10's!

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Jitesh Shah 19 April 2014

very nice sir and read my poems

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Patricia Grantham 11 April 2014

Very good Amitava. Reminds me of the hide and seek games we used to play as children. No time for games right now lets get serious. I love this.

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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2014

Very sweet and heartfelt Amitava. If only we could go back.

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