Let’s Go Comments

....Soft wooly clouds— Upon the navy blue Below the cruel soil Let’s go— Wow...excellent thought process...10++

Beyond the mysterious..... You excel here friend! From a physical void to mete-physical void! !

Reminds me of the freedom expressed in the song...Lets go fly a kite up into the atmosphere....lovely piece 10+

nice poem. your words fit this so perfectly.

nice poem. thanks for writing it.....

To fly free like a bird, up there amonst the soft wool fluffy clouds, such sweet energy of the mind creates a dream......come on Lets Go, lovely images.

providence does not allow any body the pleasure of escape unless it controls the voltage and temperature.... thud...strap.....clap....singgggg poetic extravagenz but on track good write sir...well thought out and beautiful as the dark gathering clouds...with a hint of tsunami and also deliverance... cheers an ten

yeah, let's go...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

we go........ kick start............ but how, when this earth is a great prison?

beautifullllllllllllllll call for the that travel to that free zone...smoothly penned as weightless wind which soar above all...10++++ Beyond the mysterious Endless space Non-feelings zone— Cutting the navel cord Of unkind time Let’s go—

feel free like a kite..run as the clouds fades...dropp when tired and goooooo againnnnnnnnnnnn....love the insight of this..grace

Such a flowing vivid poem. I feel like wooshing away with the kite! 10 Karin Anderson

a poem full of freedom... lovly write...10 up..

Let's go and fly...care free of time...WOW! ! ! Another phrasing poem crafted meticulously...10+++