Let's Fill The Empty Red Soul Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Let's Fill The Empty Red Soul

Rating: 5.0


sky
romantic
breast

colorful
bow
with no shaft

white pigeon
flying over sky
spreading love

closed eyes, breathing fast
existence
in twin one human

spring leaves dance slowly
as humming sound of couple
in alone green wood

let's fill the empty red soul
now pink sky greets us
to idyllic Shangri-la


-January 22,2020 Chattogram

Wednesday, January 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Syllabic form

1+3+1
3+1+3
3+5+3
5+3+5
5+7+5
7+5+7
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 28 January 2020

A very imaginative write with veiled romanticism. There is also an exhortation to fill the empty hearts with love. Lovely penning!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 January 2020

Shaft, draft! Craft of the Sky! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 23 January 2020

Magnificent piece. Fine to read. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 January 2020

Apart from the new syllabic format as explained, a lovely piece penned to fill the empty soul... and souls are increasingly becoming empty of emotions in these rat-race of times.

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Kostas Lagos 22 January 2020

Well crafted poem Mahtab!

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