Thursday, February 5, 2015

Let's Embrace A Hug Comments

Rating: 4.0

Let's embrace a hug as the night may slip by…
Who knows if we'll meet again as this could be our last
goodbye...
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Meena Mustafa
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Khairul Ahsan 05 February 2015

Your passionate poem has a strong appeal. Loved reading it. 'Life is so uncertain…Time is passing by Our souls will be reincarnated, until then goodbye' So nicely said! But I didn't understand why so much space has been left between the lines.

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